pfgoat2 2010-8-12 08:27
:excellence 难怪那么多人喜欢当警察啊，真的是很爽的说，我也想上咯，另外很喜欢女性为主角的文章，特别还是第一人称的~~
sulong113456789 2010-9-24 13:42
这么爽？我也要报考警校:excellence
shiding073 2010-10-1 02:48
呵呵，警察还有这福利哈，真真是不错啊:teeth
toy580 2010-10-1 02:50
这已第一人称写的总是感觉有点别扭。特别还是个女的。看着不是很还爽！不是淫荡的奸淫，而是粗暴的奸淫！
qiche2ban02 2010-12-18 08:35
现在有些警察就是这样子，甚至更胜一筹，不错的文章，情节描写的很细致，感谢楼主的分享。
深藏blue 2010-12-19 11:10
有点污蔑啊，也不拍吃官司吗，搞不清后台就干乱搞，都是傻子发
535395302 2010-12-20 18:41
女主的视觉，这种文不多，
警察也就这样，现实中不少。
顶:excellence
lang19830108 2012-10-8 22:32
这篇好象被转了好多次，在好多H论坛上都 有看过！
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guangdayinhang1 2016-2-11 00:18
文章是不错，描写的也挺具体的，就是感觉现实中很难发生这种事情，没有真实感！
xuzhongmin003 2016-2-11 07:17
从一篇老文公车轮奸改的，把男角色替换成了警察
zgmnzlp 2016-2-12 22:57
拿一篇老文章，换一个题目，换一些人名，你以为读者就不知道这是十多年前的公车轮奸吗？好文被糟蹋了！
xiulrozf99 2016-2-13 00:21
有一点点文不对题，不过写的很到位，尤其是人物描写和情节上，首先引入原因，之后塑造主人公的细节，代入感增强，后期情节也写得相当到位，精品佳作
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